Monday, September 17, 2007

Monday Poetry

Something short and sweet this morning

Rain falls
Gutters flow
Path floods


gautami said...

Gutter flow in Delhi with abandon.

Very succinct.

Lisa Andel said...

Nice. ;)

Dewey said...

And it makes a perfect, round raindrop!

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Now THAT belongs in a high school textbook somewhere. Like Dewey said, it makes a perfect raindrop -- but without sacrificing the rest of the image of a rainy day.


Ann said...

Cool poem (I wish it were raining here). :)

julia said...

Like Dewey and Susan, I love how you've used form to work alonside your compact poem. As a girl, I used to love rain puddles, and your poem made me see all those flooded paths I happily slopped through in my boots.

Joy Renee said...

i can almost hear it.