Something short and sweet this morning
GrayRain fallsGutters flowPath floodsSplash
Gutter flow in Delhi with abandon. Very succinct.
And it makes a perfect, round raindrop!
Now THAT belongs in a high school textbook somewhere. Like Dewey said, it makes a perfect raindrop -- but without sacrificing the rest of the image of a rainy day.Awesome.
Cool poem (I wish it were raining here). :)
Like Dewey and Susan, I love how you've used form to work alonside your compact poem. As a girl, I used to love rain puddles, and your poem made me see all those flooded paths I happily slopped through in my boots.
i can almost hear it.
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