Monday, September 17, 2007

Monday Poetry

Something short and sweet this morning


Gray
Rain falls
Gutters flow
Path floods
Splash

7 comments:

gautami said...

Gutter flow in Delhi with abandon.

Very succinct.

Lisa Andel said...

Nice. ;)

Dewey said...

And it makes a perfect, round raindrop!

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Now THAT belongs in a high school textbook somewhere. Like Dewey said, it makes a perfect raindrop -- but without sacrificing the rest of the image of a rainy day.

Awesome.

Ann said...

Cool poem (I wish it were raining here). :)

julia said...

Like Dewey and Susan, I love how you've used form to work alonside your compact poem. As a girl, I used to love rain puddles, and your poem made me see all those flooded paths I happily slopped through in my boots.

Joy Renee said...

i can almost hear it.