So I tried something new

And it sucked.

So, after some major revisions the hero is no longer, the best friend is now the lead man and the leading lady has had an attitude adjustment - and its reading alot better, yay for me! Not so yay for my tired fingers!

Well, no-one told me this whole being a writer lark was going to be easy now did they - didn't they know if I write it, it is supposed to be absolutely wonderful?? And for those of you not im my brain as I write that, that was said with a hefty dose of sarcasm :).