Sunday, September 09, 2007

Monday Poetry

Dice roll
The sound of laughter
Raucous, revealing enjoyment
Thrice wins
Snake eyes strips bare
Elation, crushing excitement
Night ends
Friends part ways
Camaraderie, gossip fodder



gautami tripathy said...

That was one winning dice game!

Anonymous said...

"...Steve Jobs, you and Apple are beginning to shake my faith in your ability to see into the future..."

Ah but they have!
The future is illiterate!

Jill said...

Are we going to Vegas this week??
I really need to go to a casino!! Might have some beginner's luck!!

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Sounds like a great bunco night!

I'd love to be in a bunco group; they seem like so much fun (and the one time I subbed for a friend, it was).

Lisa Andel said...

Dice. We used to play bunco, but it's been ages now.

Emily Veinglory said...

I've never managed to work out what the excitent is. My brain has a narrow range of interests....

julia said...

I liked your short length and your use of meter. As the meter lengthened, the excitement level of the dice players rose. Really nice.

Rhian / Crowwoman said...

errr - so not getting Rhet's nonsequitar remark.

liked the poem and the fun it evokes. loved "snake eyes strips bare" line!

Anne Douglas said...

An earlier post, Rhi, where I commented that Apple is disappointing me by not putting viable eBook apps in their latest devices.

Ann said...

Great poem, sounds fun.