Dice rollThe sound of laughterRaucous, revealing enjoymentThrice winsSnake eyes strips bareElation, crushing excitementNight endsFriends part waysCamaraderie, gossip fodder.
That was one winning dice game!
"...Steve Jobs, you and Apple are beginning to shake my faith in your ability to see into the future..."Ah but they have!The future is illiterate!
Are we going to Vegas this week?? I really need to go to a casino!! Might have some beginner's luck!!
Sounds like a great bunco night!I'd love to be in a bunco group; they seem like so much fun (and the one time I subbed for a friend, it was).
Dice. We used to play bunco, but it's been ages now.
I've never managed to work out what the excitent is. My brain has a narrow range of interests....
I liked your short length and your use of meter. As the meter lengthened, the excitement level of the dice players rose. Really nice.
errr - so not getting Rhet's nonsequitar remark. liked the poem and the fun it evokes. loved "snake eyes strips bare" line!
An earlier post, Rhi, where I commented that Apple is disappointing me by not putting viable eBook apps in their latest devices.
Great poem, sounds fun.
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